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* Org Mode Documentation Patch
@ 2018-06-23  2:23 Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth
  2018-06-23  7:36 ` Nicolas Goaziou
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From: Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth @ 2018-06-23  2:23 UTC (permalink / raw)
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This patch was originally submitted to Emacs devel, but Eli Zaretskii
redirected me here.

I've begun reading the Org Mode manual, and noticed that the wording
in some places could be improved (so far I've read up to Section 4.8).
I've attached my patch.  Some of the more drastic changes:

- Changed all occurrences of "the cursor" to "point", I thought the
  inconsistency was confusing, especially since the Emacs manual
  maintains usage of "point" throughout, so too should the Org Mode
  manual.

I have a couple of questions regarding the Org Mode manual and
submitting patches:

Section 4.6 "Link abbreviations" in the Org Mode manual link to
websites that have and/or promote non-free software.  The URLs are
used to illustrate link abbreviations in Org Mode, but I suppose this
was purely coincidental because long URLs to websites such as
gnu.org/some/long/path could be used instead.  Would it be appropriate
to change the examples in a later patch?

When the PDF version of the Org Mode manual is generated with "make
docs", the footnotes (3 and 4) around Section 4.3 are incorrectly
indented, can anyone reproduce this?  What is causing it?

Should I submit my patches as smaller ones as I read sections of the
manual or bulk them together into a larger patch, or is it just a
matter of preference?

Please let me know if you have any comments about the patch.  It's my
first one, I hope I have followed the CONTRIBUTING guide properly.

Thanks!

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Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth

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From dd4c2da7644c5449186166da43603155f4b56311 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ben Phipathananunth <bensiraphob@hotmail.co.uk>
Date: Sat, 23 Jun 2018 09:14:04 +0700
Subject: [PATCH] Fix various grammatical errors and fix terminology

* All occurrences of "the cursor" are replaced with "point"
* Begin changing "function" to "Lisp function" as used in the Emacs
manual
---
 doc/org-manual.org | 258 ++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 file changed, 128 insertions(+), 130 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/org-manual.org b/doc/org-manual.org
index c7598573a..534703519 100644
--- a/doc/org-manual.org
+++ b/doc/org-manual.org
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ Many commands in Org work on the region if the region is /active/.  To
 make use of this, you need to have ~transient-mark-mode~ turned on,
 which is the default.  If you do not like ~transient-mark-mode~, you
 can create an active region by using the mouse to select a region, or
-pressing {{{kbd(C-SPC)}}} twice before moving the cursor.
+pressing {{{kbd(C-SPC)}}} twice before moving point.
 
 ** Feedback
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -468,7 +468,7 @@ Org uses just two commands, bound to {{{kbd(TAB)}}} and
      #+end_example
 
      #+vindex: org-cycle-emulate-tab
-     The cursor must be on a headline for this to work[fn:4].
+     point must be on a headline for this to work[fn:4].
 
 - {{{kbd(S-TAB)}}} (~org-global-cycle~), {{{kbd(C-u TAB)}}} ::
 
@@ -901,7 +901,7 @@ active---promotion and demotion work on all headlines in the region.
 To select a region of headlines, it is best to place both point and
 mark at the beginning of a line, mark at the beginning of the first
 headline, and point at the line just after the last headline to
-change.  Note that when the cursor is inside a table (see [[*Tables]]),
+change.  Note that when point is inside a table (see [[*Tables]]),
 the Meta-Cursor keys have different functionality.
 
 ** Sparse Trees
@@ -1066,7 +1066,7 @@ of indentation between items and theirs sub-items, customize
 ~org-list-indent-offset~.
 
 #+vindex: org-list-automatic-rules
-The following commands act on items when the cursor is in the first
+The following commands act on items when point is in the first
 line of an item---the line with the bullet or number.  Some of them
 imply the application of automatic rules to keep list structure
 intact.  If some of these actions get in your way, configure
@@ -1080,7 +1080,7 @@ intact.  If some of these actions get in your way, configure
      #+findex: org-cycle
      #+vindex: org-cycle-include-plain-lists
      Items can be folded just like headline levels.  Normally this
-     works only if the cursor is on a plain list item.  For more
+     works only if point is on a plain list item.  For more
      details, see the variable ~org-cycle-include-plain-lists~.  If
      this variable is set to ~integrate~, plain list items are treated
      like low-level headlines.  The level of an item is then given by
@@ -1194,7 +1194,7 @@ intact.  If some of these actions get in your way, configure
      #+vindex: org-support-shift-select
      #+kindex: S-LEFT
      #+kindex: S-RIGHT
-     This command also cycles bullet styles when the cursor in on the
+     This command also cycles bullet styles when point in on the
      bullet or anywhere in an item line, details depending on
      ~org-support-shift-select~.
 
@@ -1241,7 +1241,7 @@ Completion over drawer keywords is also possible using
 
 Visibility cycling (see [[*Visibility Cycling]]) on the headline hides and
 shows the entry, but keep the drawer collapsed to a single line.  In
-order to look inside the drawer, you need to move the cursor to the
+order to look inside the drawer, you need to move point to the
 drawer line and press {{{kbd(TAB)}}} there.
 
 You can also arrange for state change notes (see [[Tracking TODO state
@@ -1328,7 +1328,7 @@ The following command handles footnotes:
      The footnote action command.
 
      #+kindex: C-c C-x f
-     When the cursor is on a footnote reference, jump to the
+     When point is on a footnote reference, jump to the
      definition.  When it is at a definition, jump to
      the---first---reference.
 
@@ -1357,7 +1357,7 @@ The following command handles footnotes:
 - {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} ::
 
      #+kindex: C-c C-c
-     If the cursor is on a footnote reference, jump to the definition.
+     If point is on a footnote reference, jump to the definition.
      If it is at the definition, jump back to the reference.  When
      called at a footnote location with a prefix argument, offer the
      same menu as {{{kbd(C-c C-x f)}}}.
@@ -1450,7 +1450,7 @@ fields.  Even faster would be to type =|Name|Phone|Age= followed by
 When typing text into a field, Org treats {{{kbd(DEL)}}},
 {{{kbd(Backspace)}}}, and all character keys in a special way, so that
 inserting and deleting avoids shifting other fields.  Also, when
-typing /immediately/ after the cursor was moved into a new field with
+typing /immediately/ after point was moved into a new field with
 {{{kbd(TAB)}}}, {{{kbd(S-TAB)}}} or {{{kbd(RET)}}}, the field is
 automatically made blank.  If this behavior is too unpredictable for
 you, configure the option ~org-table-auto-blank-field~.
@@ -1488,7 +1488,7 @@ you, configure the option ~org-table-auto-blank-field~.
 
      #+kindex: C-c C-c
      #+findex: org-table-align
-     Re-align the table without moving the cursor.
+     Re-align the table without moving point.
 
 - {{{kbd(TAB)}}} (~org-table-next-field~) ::
 
@@ -1557,7 +1557,7 @@ you, configure the option ~org-table-auto-blank-field~.
 
      #+kindex: M-S-RIGHT
      #+findex: org-table-insert-column
-     Insert a new column to the left of the cursor position.
+     Insert a new column to the left of point position.
 
 - {{{kbd(M-UP)}}} (~org-table-move-row-up~) ::
 
@@ -1595,7 +1595,7 @@ you, configure the option ~org-table-auto-blank-field~.
 
      #+kindex: C-c RET
      #+findex: org-table-hline-and-move
-     Insert a horizontal line below current row, and move the cursor
+     Insert a horizontal line below current row, and move point
      into the row below that line.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-c ^)}}} (~org-table-sort-lines~) ::
@@ -1651,7 +1651,7 @@ you, configure the option ~org-table-auto-blank-field~.
 
      #+kindex: M-RET
      #+findex: org-table-wrap-region
-     Split the current field at the cursor position and move the rest
+     Split the current field at point position and move the rest
      to the line below.  If there is an active region, and both point
      and mark are in the same column, the text in the column is
      wrapped to minimum width for the given number of lines.
@@ -1704,8 +1704,8 @@ you, configure the option ~org-table-auto-blank-field~.
      Alignment]]).  When called with a {{{kbd(C-u)}}} prefix, just make
      the full field visible, so that it can be edited in place.  When
      called with two {{{kbd(C-u)}}} prefixes, make the editor window
-     follow the cursor through the table and always show the current
-     field.  The follow mode exits automatically when the cursor
+     follow point through the table and always show the current
+     field.  The follow mode exits automatically when point
      leaves the table, or when you repeat this command with {{{kbd(C-u
      C-u C-c `)}}}.
 
@@ -2279,11 +2279,11 @@ interpolated as a Lisp string (in double-quotes) containing the field.
 If you provide the =N= mode switch, all referenced elements are
 numbers---non-number fields will be zero---and interpolated as Lisp
 numbers, without quotes.  If you provide the =L= flag, all fields are
-interpolated literally, without quotes.  I.e., if you want a reference
-to be interpreted as a string by the Lisp form, enclose the reference
-operator itself in double-quotes, like ="$3"=.  Ranges are inserted as
-space-separated fields, so you can embed them in list or vector
-syntax.
+interpolated literally, without quotes.  For example, if you want a
+reference to be interpreted as a string by the Lisp form, enclose the
+reference operator itself in double-quotes, like ="$3"=.  Ranges are
+inserted as space-separated fields, so you can embed them in list or
+vector syntax.
 
 Here are a few examples---note how the =N= mode is used when we do
 computations in Lisp:
@@ -2346,7 +2346,7 @@ considered as seconds in addition and subtraction.
 
 To assign a formula to a particular field, type it directly into the
 field, preceded by =:==, for example =vsum(@II..III)=.  When you press
-{{{kbd(TAB)}}} or {{{kbd(RET)}}} or {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with the cursor
+{{{kbd(TAB)}}} or {{{kbd(RET)}}} or {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with point
 still in the field, the formula is stored as the formula for this
 field, evaluated, and the current field is replaced with the result.
 
@@ -2360,9 +2360,8 @@ formulas are modified in order to still reference the same field.  To
 avoid this from happening, in particular in range references, anchor
 ranges at the table borders (using =@<=, =@>=, =$<=, =$>=), or at
 hlines using the =@I= notation.  Automatic adaptation of field
-references does of course not happen if you edit the table structure
-with normal editing commands---then you must fix the equations
-yourself.
+references does not happen if you edit the table structure with normal
+editing commands---you must fix the formulas yourself.
 
 Instead of typing an equation into the field, you may also use the
 following command
@@ -2423,7 +2422,7 @@ column formulas very easy to use.
 
 To assign a formula to a column, type it directly into any field in
 the column, preceded by an equal sign, like ==$1+$2=.  When you press
-{{{kbd(TAB)}}} or {{{kbd(RET)}}} or {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with the cursor
+{{{kbd(TAB)}}} or {{{kbd(RET)}}} or {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with point
 still in the field, the formula is stored as the formula for the
 current column, evaluated and the current field replaced with the
 result.  If the field contains only ===, the previously stored formula
@@ -2536,7 +2535,7 @@ you prefer to only work with the internal format (like =@3$2= or
      #+kindex: C-c ?
      #+findex: org-table-field-info
      While editing a formula in a table field, highlight the field(s)
-     referenced by the reference at the cursor position in the
+     referenced by the reference at point position in the
      formula.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-c })}}} (~org-table-toggle-coordinate-overlays~) ::
@@ -2559,9 +2558,9 @@ you prefer to only work with the internal format (like =@3$2= or
      #+findex: org-table-edit-formulas
      Edit all formulas for the current table in a special buffer,
      where the formulas are displayed one per line.  If the current
-     field has an active formula, the cursor in the formula editor
+     field has an active formula, point in the formula editor
      marks it.  While inside the special buffer, Org automatically
-     highlights any field or range reference at the cursor position.
+     highlights any field or range reference at point position.
      You may edit, remove and add formulas, and use the following
      commands:
 
@@ -2668,10 +2667,10 @@ recalculation commands in the table.
 #+cindex: @samp{TBLFM}, switching
 
 #+kindex: C-c C-c
-You may apply the formula temporarily.  This is useful when you switch
-the formula.  Place multiple =TBLFM= keywords right after the table,
-and then press {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} on the formula to apply.  Here is an
-example:
+You may apply the formula temporarily.  This is useful when you want
+to switch the formula applied to the table.  Place multiple =TBLFM=
+keywords right after the table, and then press {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} on
+the formula to apply.  Here is an example:
 
 #+begin_example
 | x | y |
@@ -2696,7 +2695,7 @@ Pressing {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} in the line of =#+TBLFM: $2=$1*2= yields:
 
 #+texinfo: @noindent
 Note: If you recalculate this table, with {{{kbd(C-u C-c *)}}}, for
-example, you get the following result of applying only the first
+example, you get the following result from applying only the first
 =TBLFM= keyword.
 
 #+begin_example
@@ -2995,7 +2994,7 @@ For more information and examples see the [[https://orgmode.org/worg/org-tutoria
 :UNNUMBERED: notoc
 :END:
 
-While the cursor is on a column, typing {{{kbd(C-c " a)}}} or
+While point is on a column, typing {{{kbd(C-c " a)}}} or
 {{{kbd(M-x orgtbl-ascii-plot)}}} create a new column containing an
 ASCII-art bars plot.  The plot is implemented through a regular column
 formula.  When the source column changes, the bar plot may be updated
@@ -3035,8 +3034,8 @@ defaults to =12=.
 :END:
 #+cindex: hyperlinks
 
-Like HTML, Org provides links inside a file, external links to
-other files, Usenet articles, emails, and much more.
+Like HTML, Org provides support for links inside a file, external
+links to other files, Usenet articles, emails, and much more.
 
 ** Link Format
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -3063,10 +3062,10 @@ highlighted in the face ~org-link~, which by default is an underlined
 face.  You can directly edit the visible part of a link.  Note that
 this can be either the LINK part, if there is no description, or the
 {{{var(DESCRIPTION)}}} part.  To edit also the invisible
-{{{var(LINK)}}} part, use {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}} with the cursor on the
+{{{var(LINK)}}} part, use {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}} with point on the
 link.
 
-If you place the cursor at the beginning or just behind the end of the
+If you place point at the beginning or just behind the end of the
 displayed text and press {{{kbd(BS)}}}, you remove
 the---invisible---bracket at that location.  This makes the link
 incomplete and the internals are again displayed as plain text.
@@ -3092,7 +3091,7 @@ custom IDs are unique in a file.
 Links such as =[[My Target]]= or =[[My Target][Find my target]]= lead to a text search in
 the current file.
 
-The link can be followed with {{{kbd(C-c C-o)}}} when the cursor is on
+The link can be followed with {{{kbd(C-c C-o)}}} when point is on
 the link, or with a mouse click (see [[*Handling Links]]).  Links to
 custom IDs point to the corresponding headline.  The preferred match
 for a text link is a /dedicated target/: the same string in double
@@ -3155,7 +3154,7 @@ Target>>>= causes each occurrence of =my target= in normal text to
 become activated as a link.  The Org file is scanned automatically for
 radio targets only when the file is first loaded into Emacs.  To
 update the target list during editing, press {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with
-the cursor on or at a target.
+point on or at a target.
 
 ** External Links
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -3214,10 +3213,10 @@ the colon.  The following list shows examples for each link type.
 
 #+cindex: VM links
 #+cindex: Wanderlust links
-On top of these built-in link types, some are available through the
-=contrib/= directory (see [[*Installation]]).  For example, these links to
-VM or Wanderlust messages are available when you load the
-corresponding libraries from the =contrib/= directory:
+On top of these built-in link types, additional ones are available
+through the =contrib/= directory (see [[*Installation]]).  For example,
+these links to VM or Wanderlust messages are available when you load
+the corresponding libraries from the =contrib/= directory:
 
 | =vm:folder=                            | VM folder link          |
 | =vm:folder#id=                         | VM message link         |
@@ -3227,11 +3226,11 @@ corresponding libraries from the =contrib/= directory:
 | =wl:folder=                            | Wanderlust folder link  |
 | =wl:folder#id=                         | Wanderlust message link |
 
-For customizing Org to add new link types, see [[*Adding Hyperlink
-Types]].
+For information on customizing Org to add new link types, see [[*Adding
+Hyperlink Types]].
 
 A link should be enclosed in double brackets and may contain
-a descriptive text to be displayed instead of the URL (see [[*Link
+descriptive text to be displayed instead of the URL (see [[*Link
 Format]]), for example:
 
 : [[http://www.gnu.org/software/emacs/][GNU Emacs]]
@@ -3248,7 +3247,7 @@ image is inlined into the exported HTML file.
 Org also finds external links in the normal text and activates them as
 links.  If spaces must be part of the link (for example in
 =bbdb:Richard Stallman=), or if you need to remove ambiguities about
-the end of the link, enclose them in square or angular brackets.
+the end of the link, enclose the link in square or angular brackets.
 
 ** Handling Links
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -3265,12 +3264,12 @@ The main function is ~org-store-link~, called with {{{kbd(M-x
 org-store-link)}}}.  Because of its importance, we suggest to bind it
 to a widely available key (see [[*Activation]]).  It stores a link to the
 current location.  The link is stored for later insertion into an Org
-buffer---see below.  What kind of link is created depends on the
+buffer---see below.  The kind of link that is created depends on the
 current buffer:
 
 - /Org mode buffers/ ::
 
-     For Org files, if there is a =<<target>>= at the cursor, the link
+     For Org files, if there is a =<<target>>= at point, the link
      points to the target.  Otherwise it points to the current
      headline, which is also the description[fn:28].
 
@@ -3295,7 +3294,7 @@ current buffer:
 
 - /Web browsers: W3, W3M and EWW/ ::
 
-     Here the link is the current URL, with the page title as
+     Here the link is the current URL, with the page title as the
      description.
 
 - /Contacts: BBDB/ ::
@@ -3315,18 +3314,16 @@ current buffer:
      For any other file, the link points to the file, with a search
      string (see [[*Search Options in File Links]]) pointing to the
      contents of the current line.  If there is an active region, the
-     selected words form the basis of the search string.  If the
-     automatically created link is not working correctly or accurately
-     enough, you can write custom functions to select the search
-     string and to do the search for particular file types (see
-     [[*Custom Searches]]).
+     selected words form the basis of the search string. You can write
+     custom Lisp functions to select the search string and perform the
+     search for particular file types (see [[*Custom Searches]]).
 
      You can also define dedicated links to other files.  See [[*Adding
      Hyperlink Types]].
 
 - /Agenda view/ ::
 
-     When the cursor is in an agenda view, the created link points to
+     When point is in an agenda view, the created link points to
      the entry referenced by the current line.
 
 From an Org buffer, the following commands create, navigate or, more
@@ -3385,7 +3382,7 @@ generally, act on links.
 - {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}} (with cursor on existing link) ::
 
      #+cindex: following links
-     When the cursor is on an existing link, {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}} allows
+     When point is on an existing link, {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}} allows
      you to edit the link and description parts of the link.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-c C-o)}}} (~org-open-at-point~) ::
@@ -3396,8 +3393,8 @@ generally, act on links.
      Open link at point.  This launches a web browser for URL (using
      ~browse-url-at-point~), run VM/MH-E/Wanderlust/Rmail/Gnus/BBDB
      for the corresponding links, and execute the command in a shell
-     link.  When the cursor is on an internal link, this command runs
-     the corresponding search.  When the cursor is on a TAG list in
+     link.  When point is on an internal link, this command runs
+     the corresponding search.  When point is on a TAG list in
      a headline, it creates the corresponding TAGS view.  If the
      cursor is on a timestamp, it compiles the agenda for that date.
      Furthermore, it visits text and remote files in =file= links with
@@ -3409,7 +3406,7 @@ generally, act on links.
      C-u)}}} prefix.
 
      #+vindex: org-link-frame-setup
-     If the cursor is on a headline, but not on a link, offer all
+     If point is on a headline, but not on a link, offer all
      links in the headline and entry text.  If you want to setup the
      frame configuration for following links, customize
      ~org-link-frame-setup~.
@@ -3455,7 +3452,7 @@ generally, act on links.
      #+kindex: C-c %
      #+findex: org-mark-ring-push
      #+cindex: mark ring
-     Push the current position onto the mark ring, to be able to
+     Push the current position onto the Org mark ring, to be able to
      return easily.  Commands following an internal link do this
      automatically.
 
@@ -3536,14 +3533,15 @@ replacement text.  Here is an example:
 If the replacement text contains the string =%s=, it is replaced with
 the tag.  Using =%h= instead of =%s= percent-encodes the tag (see the
 example above, where we need to encode the URL parameter).  Using
-=%(my-function)= passes the tag to a custom function, and replace it
-by the resulting string.
+=%(my-function)= passes the tag to a custom Lisp function, and replace
+it by the resulting string.
 
 If the replacement text do not contain any specifier, it is simply
 appended to the string in order to create the link.
 
-Instead of a string, you may also specify a function that will be
-called with the tag as the only argument to create the link.
+Instead of a string, you may also specify a Lisp function to create
+the link.  Such a function will be called with the tag as the only
+argument.
 
 With the above setting, you could link to a specific bug with
 =[[bugzilla:129]]=, search the web for =OrgMode= with =[[google:OrgMode]]=,
@@ -3563,11 +3561,11 @@ can define them in the file with
 
 #+texinfo: @noindent
 In-buffer completion (see [[*Completion]]) can be used after =[= to
-complete link abbreviations.  You may also define a function that
-implements special (e.g., completion) support for inserting such
-a link with {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}}.  Such a function should not accept any
-arguments, and return the full link with prefix.  You can set the link
-completion function like this:
+complete link abbreviations.  You may also define a Lisp function that
+implements special (e.g., completion) support for inserting such a
+link with {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}}.  Such a function should not accept any
+arguments, and should return the full link with a prefix.  You can set
+the link completion function like this:
 
 #+begin_src emacs-lisp
 (org-link-set-parameter "type" :complete #'some-completion-function)
@@ -3590,7 +3588,7 @@ as a search string that can be used to find this line back later when
 following the link with {{{kbd(C-c C-o)}}}.
 
 Here is the syntax of the different ways to attach a search to a file
-link, together with an explanation:
+link, together with explanations for each:
 
 #+begin_example
 [[file:~/code/main.c::255]]
@@ -3971,7 +3969,7 @@ buffer and then use {{{kbd(M-TAB)}}} completion.
 Remember that the keywords after the vertical bar---or the last
 keyword if no bar is there---must always mean that the item is DONE,
 although you may use a different word.  After changing one of these
-lines, use {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with the cursor still in the line to
+lines, use {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with point still in the line to
 make the changes known to Org mode[fn:41].
 
 *** Faces for TODO keywords
@@ -4525,7 +4523,7 @@ The following commands work with checkboxes:
        first.  With a prefix argument, add or remove the checkbox for
        all items in the region.
 
-     - If the cursor is in a headline, toggle checkboxes in the region
+     - If point is in a headline, toggle checkboxes in the region
        between this headline and the next---so /not/ the entire
        subtree.
 
@@ -4536,7 +4534,7 @@ The following commands work with checkboxes:
 
      #+kindex: M-S-RET
      #+findex: org-insert-todo-heading
-     Insert a new item with a checkbox.  This works only if the cursor
+     Insert a new item with a checkbox.  This works only if point
      is already in a plain list item (see [[*Plain Lists]]).
 
 - {{{kbd(C-c C-x o)}}} (~org-toggle-ordered-property~) ::
@@ -4669,7 +4667,7 @@ also a special command for inserting tags:
 - {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} (~org-set-tags-command~) ::
 
      #+kindex: C-c C-c
-     When the cursor is in a headline, this does the same as
+     When point is in a headline, this does the same as
      {{{kbd(C-c C-q)}}}.
 
 #+vindex: org-complete-tags-always-offer-all-agenda-tags
@@ -4747,7 +4745,7 @@ you indicate that at most one of =@work=, =@home=, and =@tennisclub=
 should be selected.  Multiple such groups are allowed.
 
 #+texinfo: @noindent
-Do not forget to press {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with the cursor in one of
+Do not forget to press {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with point in one of
 these lines to activate any changes.
 
 #+texinfo: @noindent
@@ -5130,7 +5128,7 @@ The following commands help to work with properties:
 
      #+kindex: C-c C-c
      #+findex: org-property-action
-     With the cursor in a property drawer, this executes property
+     With point in a property drawer, this executes property
      commands.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-c C-c s)}}} (~org-set-property~) ::
@@ -5491,9 +5489,9 @@ either for all clocks or just for today.
      #+kindex: C-c C-x C-c
      #+vindex: org-columns
      #+vindex: org-columns-default-format
-     Turn on column view.  If the cursor is before the first headline
+     Turn on column view.  If point is before the first headline
      in the file, column view is turned on for the entire file, using
-     the =#+COLUMNS= definition.  If the cursor is somewhere inside
+     the =#+COLUMNS= definition.  If point is somewhere inside
      the outline, this command searches the hierarchy, up from point,
      for a =COLUMNS= property that defines a format.  When one is
      found, the column view table is established for the tree starting
@@ -5685,7 +5683,7 @@ The following commands insert or update the dynamic block:
      #+kindex: C-c C-c
      #+kindex: C-c C-x C-u
      #+findex: org-dblock-update
-     Update dynamic block at point.  The cursor needs to be in the
+     Update dynamic block at point.  point needs to be in the
      =#+BEGIN= line of the dynamic block.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-u C-c C-x C-u)}}} (~org-update-all-dblocks~) ::
@@ -5858,7 +5856,7 @@ format.
 
      #+kindex: C-c <
      #+findex: org-date-from-calendar
-     Insert a timestamp corresponding to the cursor date in the
+     Insert a timestamp corresponding to point date in the
      calendar.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-c >)}}} (~org-goto-calendar~) ::
@@ -5891,12 +5889,12 @@ format.
      #+kindex: S-UP
      #+kindex: S-DOWN
      On the beginning or enclosing bracket of a timestamp, change its
-     type.  Within a timestamp, change the item under the cursor.  The
+     type.  Within a timestamp, change the item under point.  The
      cursor can be on a year, month, day, hour or minute.  When the
      timestamp contains a time range like =15:30-16:30=, modifying the
      first time also shifts the second, shifting the time block with
      constant length.  To change the length, modify the second time.
-     Note that if the cursor is in a headline and not at a timestamp,
+     Note that if point is in a headline and not at a timestamp,
      these same keys modify the priority of an item (see [[*Priorities]]).
      The key bindings also conflict with shift-selection and related
      modes (see [[*Packages that conflict with Org mode]]).
@@ -6059,11 +6057,11 @@ date/time format does not /replace/ the default format.  Instead, it
 is put /over/ the default format using text properties.  This has the
 following consequences:
 
-- You cannot place the cursor onto a timestamp anymore, only before or
+- You cannot place point onto a timestamp anymore, only before or
   after.
 
 - The {{{kbd(S-UP)}}} and {{{kbd(S-DOWN)}}} keys can no longer be used
-  to adjust each component of a timestamp.  If the cursor is at the
+  to adjust each component of a timestamp.  If point is at the
   beginning of the stamp, {{{kbd(S-UP)}}} and {{{kbd(S-DOWN)}}} change
   the stamp by one day, just like {{{kbd(S-LEFT)}}}
   {{{kbd(S-RIGHT)}}}.  At the end of the stamp, change the time by one
@@ -6208,7 +6206,7 @@ schedule an item:[fn:66]
      #+findex: org-mark-entry-for-agenda-action
      Mark the current entry for agenda action.  After you have marked
      the entry like this, you can open the agenda or the calendar to
-     find an appropriate date.  With the cursor on the selected date,
+     find an appropriate date.  With point on the selected date,
      press {{{kbd(k s)}}} or {{{kbd(k d)}}} to schedule the marked
      item.
 
@@ -6550,7 +6548,7 @@ formatted as one or several Org tables.
      #+kindex: C-c C-c
      #+kindex: C-c C-x C-u
      #+findex: org-dblock-update
-     Update dynamic block at point.  The cursor needs to be in the
+     Update dynamic block at point.  point needs to be in the
      =BEGIN= line of the dynamic block.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-u C-c C-x C-u)}}} ::
@@ -7118,7 +7116,7 @@ You may also define a global key for capturing new material (see
      #+findex: org-capture-refile
      Finalize the capture process by refiling the note to a different
      place (see [[*Refile and Copy]]).  Please realize that this is
-     a normal refiling command that will be executed---so the cursor
+     a normal refiling command that will be executed---so point
      position at the moment you run this command is important.  If you
      have inserted a tree with a parent and children, first move the
      cursor back to the parent.  Any prefix argument given to this
@@ -7306,7 +7304,7 @@ Now lets look at the elements of a template definition.  Each entry in
 
      - =(file+regexp "filename" "regexp to find location")= ::
 
-          Use a regular expression to position the cursor.
+          Use a regular expression to position point.
 
      - =(file+olp+datetree "filename" [ "Level 1 heading" ...])= ::
 
@@ -8093,7 +8091,7 @@ file, the archive file.
      #+kindex: C-c $
      #+findex: org-archive-subtree
      #+vindex: org-archive-location
-     Archive the subtree starting at the cursor position to the
+     Archive the subtree starting at point position to the
      location given by ~org-archive-location~.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-u C-c C-x C-s)}}} ::
@@ -8102,7 +8100,7 @@ file, the archive file.
      Check if any direct children of the current headline could be
      moved to the archive.  To do this, check each subtree for open
      TODO entries.  If none is found, the command offers to move it to
-     the archive location.  If the cursor is /not/ on a headline when
+     the archive location.  If point is /not/ on a headline when
      this command is invoked, check level 1 trees.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-u C-u C-c C-x C-s)}}} ::
@@ -8202,7 +8200,7 @@ The following commands help manage the =ARCHIVE= tag:
      Check if any direct children of the current headline should be
      archived.  To do this, check each subtree for open TODO entries.
      If none is found, the command offers to set the =ARCHIVE= tag for
-     the child.  If the cursor is /not/ on a headline when this
+     the child.  If point is /not/ on a headline when this
      command is invoked, check the level 1 trees.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-TAB)}}} (~org-force-cycle-archived~) ::
@@ -8341,7 +8339,7 @@ scope for an extended period, use the following commands:
      #+findex: org-agenda-set-restriction-lock
      Restrict the agenda to the current subtree.  If there already is
      a restriction at point, remove it.  When called with a universal
-     prefix argument or with the cursor before the first headline in a
+     prefix argument or with point before the first headline in a
      file, set the agenda scope to the entire file.  This restriction
      remains in effect until removed with {{{kbd(C-c C-x >)}}}, or by typing
      either {{{kbd(<)}}} or {{{kbd(>)}}} in the agenda dispatcher.  If there is a
@@ -8362,7 +8360,7 @@ the Speedbar frame:
 
      #+findex: org-speedbar-set-agenda-restriction
      Restrict the agenda to the item---either an Org file or a subtree
-     in such a file---at the cursor in the Speedbar frame.  If agenda
+     in such a file---at point in the Speedbar frame.  If agenda
      is already restricted there, remove the restriction.  If there is
      a window displaying an agenda view, the new restriction takes
      effect immediately.
@@ -9337,7 +9335,7 @@ agenda buffer.  In this way, all information is stored only once,
 removing the risk that your agenda and note files may diverge.
 
 Some commands can be executed with mouse clicks on agenda lines.  For
-the other commands, the cursor needs to be in the desired line.
+the other commands, point needs to be in the desired line.
 
 *** Motion
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -9394,7 +9392,7 @@ the other commands, the cursor needs to be in the desired line.
      #+kindex: F
      #+findex: org-agenda-follow-mode
      #+vindex: org-agenda-start-with-follow-mode
-     Toggle Follow mode.  In Follow mode, as you move the cursor
+     Toggle Follow mode.  In Follow mode, as you move point
      through the agenda buffer, the other window always shows the
      corresponding location in the Org file.  The initial setting for
      this mode in new agenda buffers can be set with the variable
@@ -10058,14 +10056,14 @@ the other commands, the cursor needs to be in the desired line.
      #+kindex: c
      #+findex: org-calendar-goto-agenda
      When in the calendar, compute and show the Org agenda for the
-     date at the cursor.
+     date at point.
 
 - {{{kbd(i)}}} (~org-agenda-diary-entry~) ::
      #+kindex: i
      #+findex: org-agenda-diary-entry
 
      #+cindex: diary entries, creating from agenda
-     Insert a new entry into the diary, using the date at the cursor
+     Insert a new entry into the diary, using the date at point
      and (for block entries) the date at the mark.  This adds to the
      Emacs diary file[fn:98], in a way similar to the {{{kbd(i)}}}
      command in the calendar.  The diary file pops up in another
@@ -10110,7 +10108,7 @@ the other commands, the cursor needs to be in the desired line.
 
      #+kindex: H
      #+findex: org-agenda-holidays
-     Show holidays for three months around the cursor date.
+     Show holidays for three months around point date.
 
 *** Quit and exit
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -11037,7 +11035,7 @@ images.
      point, process all fragments in the current entry (between two
      headlines).  When called with a prefix argument, process the
      entire subtree.  When called with two prefix arguments, or when
-     the cursor is before the first headline, process the entire
+     point is before the first headline, process the entire
      buffer.
 
 #+vindex: org-startup-with-latex-preview
@@ -11083,9 +11081,9 @@ more details see the documentation of CDLaTeX mode):
 - {{{kbd(TAB)}}} ::
      #+kindex: TAB
 
-     The {{{kbd(TAB)}}} key expands the template if the cursor is
+     The {{{kbd(TAB)}}} key expands the template if point is
      inside a LaTeX fragment[fn:115].  For example, {{{kbd(TAB)}}}
-     expands =fr= to =\frac{}{}= and position the cursor correctly
+     expands =fr= to =\frac{}{}= and position point correctly
      inside the first brace.  Another {{{kbd(TAB)}}} gets you into the
      second brace.
 
@@ -11236,10 +11234,10 @@ further alter what is exported, and how.
      #+kindex: C-c C-e C-s
 
      Toggle sub-tree export.  When turned on, Org exports only the
-     sub-tree starting from the cursor position at the time the export
+     sub-tree starting from point position at the time the export
      dispatcher was invoked.  Org uses the top heading of this
-     sub-tree as the document's title.  If the cursor is not on
-     a heading, Org uses the nearest enclosing header.  If the cursor
+     sub-tree as the document's title.  If point is not on
+     a heading, Org uses the nearest enclosing header.  If point
      is in the document preamble, Org signals an error and aborts
      export.
 
@@ -18288,7 +18286,7 @@ key chords.
 #+vindex: org-use-speed-commands
 By default, Org has Speed Keys disabled.  To activate Speed Keys, set
 the variable ~org-use-speed-commands~ to a non-~nil~ value.  To
-trigger a Speed Key, the cursor must be at the beginning of an Org
+trigger a Speed Key, point must be at the beginning of an Org
 headline, before any of the stars.
 
 #+vindex: org-speed-commands-user
@@ -18480,7 +18478,7 @@ changes.
      also parses and loads the document during normal exporting
      process.  Org parses the contents of this document as if it was
      included in the buffer.  It can be another Org file.  To visit
-     the file---not a URL---use {{{kbd(C-c ')}}} while the cursor is
+     the file---not a URL---use {{{kbd(C-c ')}}} while point is
      on the line with the file name.
 
 - =#+STARTUP:= ::
@@ -18776,42 +18774,42 @@ manual, but here is a consolidated list for easy reference.
 - If any highlights shown in the buffer from the creation of a sparse
   tree, or from clock display, remove such highlights.
 
-- If the cursor is in one of the special =KEYWORD= lines, scan the
+- If point is in one of the special =KEYWORD= lines, scan the
   buffer for these lines and update the information.  Also reset the
   Org file cache used to temporary store the contents of URLs used as
   values for keywords like =SETUPFILE=.
 
-- If the cursor is inside a table, realign the table.  The table
+- If point is inside a table, realign the table.  The table
   realigns even if automatic table editor is turned off.
 
-- If the cursor is on a =TBLFM= keyword, re-apply the formulas to the
+- If point is on a =TBLFM= keyword, re-apply the formulas to the
   entire table.
 
 - If the current buffer is a capture buffer, close the note and file
   it.  With a prefix argument, also jump to the target location after
   saving the note.
 
-- If the cursor is on a =<<<target>>>=, update radio targets and
+- If point is on a =<<<target>>>=, update radio targets and
   corresponding links in this buffer.
 
-- If the cursor is on a property line or at the start or end of
+- If point is on a property line or at the start or end of
   a property drawer, offer property commands.
 
-- If the cursor is at a footnote reference, go to the corresponding
+- If point is at a footnote reference, go to the corresponding
   definition, and /vice versa/.
 
-- If the cursor is on a statistics cookie, update it.
+- If point is on a statistics cookie, update it.
 
-- If the cursor is in a plain list item with a checkbox, toggle the
+- If point is in a plain list item with a checkbox, toggle the
   status of the checkbox.
 
-- If the cursor is on a numbered item in a plain list, renumber the
+- If point is on a numbered item in a plain list, renumber the
   ordered list.
 
-- If the cursor is on the =#+BEGIN= line of a dynamic block, the block
+- If point is on the =#+BEGIN= line of a dynamic block, the block
   is updated.
 
-- If the cursor is at a timestamp, fix the day name in the timestamp.
+- If point is at a timestamp, fix the day name in the timestamp.
 
 ** A Cleaner Outline View
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -19046,7 +19044,7 @@ packages are documented here.
 
           #+kindex: C-c '
           #+findex: org-edit-special
-          Edit a =table.el= table.  Works when the cursor is in
+          Edit a =table.el= table.  Works when point is in
           a =table.el= table.
 
      - {{{kbd(C-c ~​)}}} (~org-table-create-with-table.el~) ::
@@ -19076,7 +19074,7 @@ not do anything, Org offers the variable ~org-support-shift-select~
 for customization.  Org mode accommodates shift selection by (i)
 making it available outside of the special contexts where special
 commands apply, and (ii) extending an existing active region even if
-the cursor moves across a special context.
+point moves across a special context.
 
 - =cua.el= by Kim\nbsp{}F.\nbsp{}Storm ::
 
@@ -20098,13 +20096,13 @@ entry point for this API is:
 Call {{{(var(FUNC))}}} at each headline selected by {{{var(MATCH)}}}
 in {{{var(SCOPE)}}}.
 
-{{{var(FUNC)}}} is a function or a Lisp form.  With the cursor
+{{{var(FUNC)}}} is a function or a Lisp form.  With point
 positioned at the beginning of the headline, call the function without
 arguments.  Org returns an alist of return values of calls to the
 function.
 
 To avoid preserving point, Org wraps the call to {{{var(FUNC)}}} in
-save-excursion form.  After evaluation, Org moves the cursor to the
+save-excursion form.  After evaluation, Org moves point to the
 end of the line that was just processed.  Search continues from that
 point forward.  This may not always work as expected under some
 conditions, such as if the current sub-tree was removed by a previous
@@ -20329,7 +20327,7 @@ Org integrates its data in an inbox file format.
 
 3. Org generates an agenda view for flagged entries for user
    intervention to clean up.  For notes stored in flagged entries,
-   MobileOrg displays them in the echo area when the cursor is on the
+   MobileOrg displays them in the echo area when point is on the
    corresponding agenda item.
 
    - {{{kbd(?)}}} ::
@@ -20916,7 +20914,7 @@ can be used.  Just type a star followed by a few optional letters into
 the buffer and press {{{kbd(M-TAB)}}}.  All headlines in the current
 buffer are offered as completions.
 
-[fn:26] When targeting a =NAME= keyword, =CAPTION= keyword is
+[fn:26] When targeting a =NAME= keyword, the =CAPTION= keyword is
 mandatory in order to get proper numbering (see [[*Images and Tables]]).
 
 [fn:27] The actual behavior of the search depends on the value of the
@@ -20941,8 +20939,8 @@ automatically enclosed in double brackets, and you will be asked for
 the optional descriptive text.
 
 [fn:31] After insertion of a stored link, the link will be removed
-from the list of stored links.  To keep it in the list later use, use
-a triple {{{kbd(C-u)}}} prefix argument to {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}}, or
+from the list of stored links.  To keep it in the list for later use,
+use a triple {{{kbd(C-u)}}} prefix argument to {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}}, or
 configure the option ~org-keep-stored-link-after-insertion~.
 
 [fn:32] This works if a function has been defined in the ~:complete~
@@ -20976,7 +20974,7 @@ that this means you need to come up with unique keys across both sets
 of keywords.
 
 [fn:41] Org mode parses these lines only when Org mode is activated
-after visiting a file.  {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with the cursor in a line
+after visiting a file.  {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} with point in a line
 starting with =#+= is simply restarting Org mode for the current
 buffer.
 
@@ -21258,7 +21256,7 @@ used to create images, any LaTeX environment is handled.
 and from the ImageMagick suite.  Choose the converter by setting the
 variable ~org-preview-latex-default-process~ accordingly.
 
-[fn:115] Org mode has a method to test if the cursor is inside such
+[fn:115] Org mode has a method to test if point is inside such
 a fragment, see the documentation of the function
 ~org-inside-LaTeX-fragment-p~.
 
-- 
2.17.1


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* Re: Org Mode Documentation Patch
  2018-06-23  2:23 Org Mode Documentation Patch Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth
@ 2018-06-23  7:36 ` Nicolas Goaziou
  2018-06-23 13:28   ` Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 7+ messages in thread
From: Nicolas Goaziou @ 2018-06-23  7:36 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth; +Cc: emacs-orgmode

Hello,

"Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth" <siraben@disroot.org> writes:

> I've begun reading the Org Mode manual, and noticed that the wording
> in some places could be improved (so far I've read up to Section 4.8).
> I've attached my patch.  Some of the more drastic changes:
>
> - Changed all occurrences of "the cursor" to "point", I thought the
>   inconsistency was confusing, especially since the Emacs manual
>   maintains usage of "point" throughout, so too should the Org Mode
>   manual.

Thank you. I applied your patch. 

I'm not totally convinced by the change from "function" to "Lisp
function", since, in the context of Org, an Elisp library, there is no
ambiguity. But I have no strong opinion, so I didn't remove the
occurrences in your patch.

BTW, what is your status wrt FSF papers?

> Section 4.6 "Link abbreviations" in the Org Mode manual link to
> websites that have and/or promote non-free software.  The URLs are
> used to illustrate link abbreviations in Org Mode, but I suppose this
> was purely coincidental because long URLs to websites such as
> gnu.org/some/long/path could be used instead.  Would it be appropriate
> to change the examples in a later patch?

Sure. However, for the sake of clarity, it would be better if not all
examples are similar, i.e., no "gnu.org/some/long/path" everywhere.

> When the PDF version of the Org Mode manual is generated with "make
> docs", the footnotes (3 and 4) around Section 4.3 are incorrectly
> indented, can anyone reproduce this?

I don't see anything like that in the PDF. You may want to try deleting
it and re-generate it.

> Should I submit my patches as smaller ones as I read sections of the
> manual or bulk them together into a larger patch, or is it just a
> matter of preference?

As you wish.

> Please let me know if you have any comments about the patch.  It's my
> first one, I hope I have followed the CONTRIBUTING guide properly.

I fixed a couple of missing capitalization (point at the beginning of
a sentence) and filled modified paragraphs. I also slightly modified
your commit message.

Regards,

-- 
Nicolas Goaziou

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* Re: Org Mode Documentation Patch
  2018-06-23  7:36 ` Nicolas Goaziou
@ 2018-06-23 13:28   ` Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth
  2018-06-23 13:47     ` Nicolas Goaziou
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 7+ messages in thread
From: Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth @ 2018-06-23 13:28 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Nicolas Goaziou; +Cc: emacs-orgmode

Thank you very much for accepting the patch.

Nicolas Goaziou wrote:
> BTW, what is your status wrt FSF papers?

I just sent an email to assign@gnu.org with my information, how will I know when copyright assign is completed?

Thank you again,

-- 
Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth

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* Re: Org Mode Documentation Patch
  2018-06-23 13:28   ` Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth
@ 2018-06-23 13:47     ` Nicolas Goaziou
  2018-06-25 14:35       ` Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 7+ messages in thread
From: Nicolas Goaziou @ 2018-06-23 13:47 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth; +Cc: emacs-orgmode

"Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth" <siraben@disroot.org> writes:

> I just sent an email to assign@gnu.org with my information,

Great!

> how will I know when copyright assign is completed?

They will let you know. Then, you may let me know. :)

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* Re: Org Mode Documentation Patch
  2018-06-23 13:47     ` Nicolas Goaziou
@ 2018-06-25 14:35       ` Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth
  2018-06-25 14:54         ` Nicolas Goaziou
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 7+ messages in thread
From: Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth @ 2018-06-25 14:35 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Nicolas Goaziou; +Cc: emacs-orgmode

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I've printed, signed, scanned and sent the assignment to assign@gnu.org 
, waiting for their response.

In the meantime, please install another patch I wrote, attached.

You may notice that the email and name of the patch author is different, 
this is to correspond with my email and legal name. ("Ben" is my nickname)

Thanks,

--
Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth

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From 677ac08a5b11157f59dd5acc73a2bc7103344f22 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Siraphob Phipathananunth <siraben@disroot.org>
Date: Mon, 25 Jun 2018 21:27:05 +0700
Subject: [PATCH] Fix "cursor" to "point", fix grammar and add cross-references

* doc/org-manual : More wording and grammar is fixed, cross-references
to other sections are added when key terms appear (e.g. agenda,
property, completion).
---
 doc/org-manual.org | 323 ++++++++++++++++++++++-----------------------
 1 file changed, 161 insertions(+), 162 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/org-manual.org b/doc/org-manual.org
index f1180458a..caa23be83 100644
--- a/doc/org-manual.org
+++ b/doc/org-manual.org
@@ -1145,8 +1145,7 @@ to disable them individually.
      indentation.  When these commands are executed several times in
      direct succession, the initially selected region is used, even if
      the new indentation would imply a different hierarchy.  To use
-     the new hierarchy, break the command chain with a cursor motion
-     or so.
+     the new hierarchy, break the command chain by moving point.
 
      As a special case, using this command on the very first item of
      a list moves the whole list.  This behavior can be disabled by
@@ -1194,7 +1193,7 @@ to disable them individually.
      #+vindex: org-support-shift-select
      #+kindex: S-LEFT
      #+kindex: S-RIGHT
-     This command also cycles bullet styles when point in on the
+     This command also cycles bullet styles when point is in on the
      bullet or anywhere in an item line, details depending on
      ~org-support-shift-select~.
 
@@ -1683,7 +1682,7 @@ you, configure the option ~org-table-auto-blank-field~.
      #+vindex: org-table-copy-increment
      When current field is empty, copy from first non-empty field
      above.  When not empty, copy current field down to next row and
-     move cursor along with it.  Depending on the variable
+     move point along with it.  Depending on the variable
      ~org-table-copy-increment~, integer field values can be
      incremented during copy.  Integers that are too large are not
      incremented, however.  Also, a ~0~ prefix argument temporarily
@@ -1919,10 +1918,10 @@ to derive fields from other fields.  While fully featured, Org's
 implementation is not identical to other spreadsheets.  For example,
 Org knows the concept of a /column formula/ that will be applied to
 all non-header fields in a column without having to copy the formula
-to each relevant field.  There is also a formula debugger, and
-a formula editor with features for highlighting fields in the table
-corresponding to the references at the point in the formula, moving
-these references by arrow keys.
+to each relevant field.  There is also a formula debugger, and a
+formula editor with features for highlighting fields in the table
+corresponding to the references at point in the formula, moving these
+references by arrow keys.
 
 *** References
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -3376,7 +3375,7 @@ generally, act on links.
      possible with =~/= for your home directory.  You can force an
      absolute path with two {{{kbd(C-u)}}} prefixes.
 
-- {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}} (with cursor on existing link) ::
+- {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}} (with point on existing link) ::
 
      #+cindex: following links
      When point is on an existing link, {{{kbd(C-c C-l)}}} allows
@@ -3391,11 +3390,11 @@ generally, act on links.
      ~browse-url-at-point~), run VM/MH-E/Wanderlust/Rmail/Gnus/BBDB
      for the corresponding links, and execute the command in a shell
      link.  When point is on an internal link, this command runs the
-     corresponding search.  When point is on the tags part of
-     a headline, it creates the corresponding tags view (see [[*Matching
-     tags and properties]]).  If the cursor is on a timestamp, it
-     compiles the agenda for that date.  Furthermore, it visits text
-     and remote files in =file= links with Emacs and select a suitable
+     corresponding search.  When point is on the tags part of a
+     headline, it creates the corresponding tags view (see [[*Matching
+     tags and properties]]).  If point is on a timestamp, it compiles
+     the agenda for that date.  Furthermore, it visits text and remote
+     files in =file= links with Emacs and select a suitable
      application for local non-text files.  Classification of files is
      based on file extension only.  See option ~org-file-apps~.  If
      you want to override the default application and visit the file
@@ -3867,14 +3866,13 @@ require action.  Your setup would then look like this:
         (sequence "|" "CANCELED")))
 #+end_src
 
-The keywords should all be different, this helps Org mode to keep
-track of which subsequence should be used for a given entry.  In this
-setup, {{{kbd(C-c C-t)}}} only operates within a subsequence, so it
-switches from =DONE= to (nothing) to =TODO=, and from =FIXED= to
-(nothing) to =REPORT=.  Therefore you need a mechanism to initially
-select the correct sequence.  Besides the obvious ways like typing
-a keyword or using completion, you may also apply the following
-commands:
+The keywords should all be different, this helps Org mode keep track
+of which subsequence should be used for a given entry.  In this setup,
+{{{kbd(C-c C-t)}}} only operates within a sub-sequence, so it switches
+from =DONE= to (nothing) to =TODO=, and from =FIXED= to (nothing) to
+=REPORT=.  Therefore you need a mechanism to initially select the
+correct sequence.  In addition to typing a keyword or using completion
+(see [[*Completion]]), you may also apply the following commands:
 
 #+attr_texinfo: :sep ,
 - {{{kbd(C-u C-u C-c C-t)}}}, {{{kbd(C-S-RIGHT)}}}, {{{kbd(C-S-LEFT)}}} ::
@@ -3882,22 +3880,22 @@ commands:
      #+kindex: C-S-RIGHT
      #+kindex: C-S-LEFT
      #+kindex: C-u C-u C-c C-t
-     These keys jump from one TODO subset to the next.  In the above
-     example, {{{kbd(C-u C-u C-c C-t)}}} or {{{kbd(C-S-RIGHT)}}} would
-     jump from =TODO= or =DONE= to =REPORT=, and any of the words in
-     the second row to =CANCELED=.  Note that the {{{kbd(C-S-)}}} key
-     binding conflict with ~shift-selection-mode~ (see [[*Packages
-     that conflict with Org mode]]).
+     These keys jump from one TODO sub-sequence to the next.  In the
+     above example, {{{kbd(C-u C-u C-c C-t)}}} or {{{kbd(C-S-RIGHT)}}}
+     would jump from =TODO= or =DONE= to =REPORT=, and any of the
+     words in the second row to =CANCELED=.  Note that the
+     {{{kbd(C-S-)}}} key binding conflict with ~shift-selection-mode~
+     (see [[*Packages that conflict with Org mode]]).
 
 - {{{kbd(S-RIGHT)}}}, {{{kbd(S-LEFT)}}} ::
 
      #+kindex: S-RIGHT
      #+kindex: S-LEFT
      {{{kbd(S-LEFT)}}} and {{{kbd(S-RIGHT)}}} walk through /all/
-     keywords from all sets, so for example {{{kbd(S-RIGHT)}}} would
-     switch from =DONE= to =REPORT= in the example above.  For
-     a discussion of the interaction with ~shift-selection-mode~, see
-     [[*Packages that conflict with Org mode]].
+     keywords from all sub-sequences, so for example
+     {{{kbd(S-RIGHT)}}} would switch from =DONE= to =REPORT= in the
+     example above.  For a discussion of the interaction with
+     ~shift-selection-mode~, see [[*Packages that conflict with Org mode]].
 
 *** Fast access to TODO states
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -3943,7 +3941,7 @@ anywhere in the file:
 : #+TODO: TODO FEEDBACK VERIFY | DONE CANCELED
 
 #+texinfo: @noindent
-you may also write =#+SEQ_TODO= to be explicit about the
+You may also write =#+SEQ_TODO= to be explicit about the
 interpretation, but it means the same as =#+TODO=, or
 
 : #+TYP_TODO: Fred Sara Lucy Mike | DONE
@@ -3960,7 +3958,7 @@ A setup for using several sets in parallel would be:
 #+kindex: M-TAB
 #+texinfo: @noindent
 To make sure you are using the correct keyword, type =#+= into the
-buffer and then use {{{kbd(M-TAB)}}} completion.
+buffer and then use {{{kbd(M-TAB)}}} to complete it (see [[*Completion]]).
 
 #+cindex: DONE, final TODO keyword
 Remember that the keywords after the vertical bar---or the last
@@ -4010,15 +4008,15 @@ a background color.
 #+cindex: @samp{ORDERED}, property
 The structure of Org files---hierarchy and lists---makes it easy to
 define TODO dependencies.  Usually, a parent TODO task should not be
-marked DONE until all TODO subtasks, defined as children tasks, are
-marked as DONE.  And sometimes there is a logical sequence to a number
-of TODO (sub)tasks, so that one task cannot be acted upon before all
-siblings above it are done.  If you customize the variable
-~org-enforce-todo-dependencies~, Org blocks entries from changing state
-to DONE while they have TODO children that are not DONE.  Furthermore,
-if an entry has a property =ORDERED=, each of its TODO children is
-blocked until all earlier siblings are marked DONE.  Here is an
-example:
+marked DONE until all TODO subtasks, or children tasks, are marked as
+DONE. Sometimes there is a logical sequence to (sub)tasks, so that one
+subtask cannot be acted upon before all siblings above it have been
+marked DONE.  If you customize the variable
+~org-enforce-todo-dependencies~, Org blocks entries from changing
+state to DONE while they have TODO children that are not DONE.
+Furthermore, if an entry has a property =ORDERED=, each of its TODO
+children is blocked until all earlier siblings are marked DONE.  Here
+is an example:
 
 #+begin_example
 ,* TODO Blocked until (two) is done
@@ -4037,7 +4035,7 @@ example:
 #+cindex: TODO dependencies, @samp{NOBLOCKING}
 #+cindex: @samp{NOBLOCKING}, property
 You can ensure an entry is never blocked by using the =NOBLOCKING=
-property:
+property (see [[* Properties and Columns]]):
 
 #+begin_example
 ,* This entry is never blocked
@@ -4053,7 +4051,8 @@ property:
      #+vindex: org-track-ordered-property-with-tag
      Toggle the =ORDERED= property of the current entry.  A property is
      used for this behavior because this should be local to the
-     current entry, not inherited from entries above like a tag.
+     current entry, not inherited from entries above like a tag (see
+     [[* Tags]]).
      However, if you would like to /track/ the value of this property
      with a tag for better visibility, customize the variable
      ~org-track-ordered-property-with-tag~.
@@ -4061,18 +4060,18 @@ property:
 - {{{kbd(C-u C-u C-u C-c C-t)}}} ::
 
      #+kindex: C-u C-u C-u C-c C-t
-     Change TODO state, circumventing any state blocking.
+     Change TODO state, regardless of any state blocking.
 
 #+vindex: org-agenda-dim-blocked-tasks
 If you set the variable ~org-agenda-dim-blocked-tasks~, TODO entries
-that cannot be closed because of such dependencies are shown in
-a dimmed font or even made invisible in agenda views (see [[*Agenda
+that cannot be marked DONE because of unmarked children are shown in a
+dimmed font or even made invisible in agenda views (see [[*Agenda
 Views]]).
 
 #+cindex: checkboxes and TODO dependencies
 #+vindex: org-enforce-todo-dependencies
-You can also block changes of TODO states by looking at checkboxes
-(see [[*Checkboxes]]).  If you set the variable
+You can also block changes of TODO states by using checkboxes (see
+[[*Checkboxes]]).  If you set the variable
 ~org-enforce-todo-checkbox-dependencies~, an entry that has unchecked
 checkboxes is blocked from switching to DONE.
 
@@ -4087,12 +4086,12 @@ the contributed module =org-depend.el=.
 #+cindex: progress logging
 #+cindex: logging, of progress
 
-Org mode can automatically record a timestamp and possibly a note when
-you mark a TODO item as DONE, or even each time you change the state
-of a TODO item.  This system is highly configurable, settings can be
-on a per-keyword basis and can be localized to a file or even
-a subtree.  For information on how to clock working time for a task,
-see [[*Clocking Work Time]].
+Org mode can automatically record a timestamp and optionally a note
+when you mark a TODO item as DONE, or even each time you change the
+state of a TODO item.  This system is highly configurable, settings
+can be on a per-keyword basis and can be localized to a file or even a
+subtree.  For information on how to clock working time for a task, see
+[[*Clocking Work Time]].
 
 *** Closing items
 :PROPERTIES:
@@ -4100,7 +4099,7 @@ see [[*Clocking Work Time]].
 :END:
 
 The most basic logging is to keep track of /when/ a certain TODO item
-was finished.  This is achieved with[fn:42]
+was marked DONE.  This can be achieved with[fn:42]
 
 #+begin_src emacs-lisp
 (setq org-log-done 'time)
@@ -4136,15 +4135,14 @@ entry with a =Closing Note= heading.
 #+cindex: @samp{LOG_INTO_DRAWER}, property
 When TODO keywords are used as workflow states (see [[*TODO keywords as workflow states][*Workflow states]]),
 you might want to keep track of when a state change occurred and maybe
-take a note about this change.  You can either record just
-a timestamp, or a time-stamped note for a change.  These records are
-inserted after the headline as an itemized list, newest first[fn:44].
-When taking a lot of notes, you might want to get the notes out of the
-way into a drawer (see [[*Drawers]]).  Customize the variable
-~org-log-into-drawer~ to get this behavior---the recommended drawer
-for this is called =LOGBOOK=[fn:45].  You can also overrule the
-setting of this variable for a subtree by setting a =LOG_INTO_DRAWER=
-property.
+take a note about this change.  You can either record just a
+timestamp, or a time-stamped note.  These records are inserted after
+the headline as an itemized list, newest first[fn:44].  When taking a
+lot of notes, you might want to get the notes out of the way into a
+drawer (see [[*Drawers]]).  Customize the variable ~org-log-into-drawer~
+to get this behavior---the recommended drawer for this is called
+=LOGBOOK=[fn:45].  You can also overrule the setting of this variable
+for a subtree by setting a =LOG_INTO_DRAWER= property.
 
 Since it is normally too much to record a note for every state, Org
 mode expects configuration on a per-keyword basis for this.  This is
@@ -4212,29 +4210,29 @@ specific settings like =TODO(!)=.  For example:
 #+cindex: @samp{STYLE}, property
 
 Org has the ability to track the consistency of a special category of
-TODO, called "habits."  A habit has the following properties:
+TODO, called "habits."  To use habits, you have to enable the ~habits~
+module by customizing the variable ~org-modules~.
 
-1. You have enabled the ~habits~ module by customizing the variable
-   ~org-modules~.
+A habit has the following properties:
 
-2. The habit is a TODO item, with a TODO keyword representing an open
+1. The habit is a TODO item, with a TODO keyword representing an open
    state.
 
-3. The property =STYLE= is set to the value =habit=.
+2. The property =STYLE= is set to the value =habit= (see [[*Properties and Columns]]).
 
-4. The TODO has a scheduled date, usually with a =.+= style repeat
+3. The TODO has a scheduled date, usually with a =.+= style repeat
    interval.  A =++= style may be appropriate for habits with time
    constraints, e.g., must be done on weekends, or a =+= style for an
    unusual habit that can have a backlog, e.g., weekly reports.
 
-5. The TODO may also have minimum and maximum ranges specified by
+4. The TODO may also have minimum and maximum ranges specified by
    using the syntax =.+2d/3d=, which says that you want to do the task
    at least every three days, but at most every two days.
 
-6. You must also have state logging for the DONE state enabled (see
-   [[*Tracking TODO state changes]]), in order for historical data to be
-   represented in the consistency graph.  If it is not enabled it is
-   not an error, but the consistency graphs are largely meaningless.
+5. State logging for the DONE state is enabled (see [[*Tracking TODO state changes]]),
+   in order for historical data to be represented in the consistency
+   graph.  If it is not enabled it is not an error, but the
+   consistency graphs are largely meaningless.
 
 To give you an idea of what the above rules look like in action, here's an
 actual habit with some history:
@@ -4259,10 +4257,11 @@ actual habit with some history:
 #+end_example
 
 What this habit says is: I want to shave at most every 2 days---given
-by the =SCHEDULED= date and repeat interval---and at least every
-4 days.  If today is the 15th, then the habit first appears in the
-agenda on Oct 17, after the minimum of 2 days has elapsed, and will
-appear overdue on Oct 19, after four days have elapsed.
+by the =SCHEDULED= date and repeat interval---and at least every 4
+days.  If today is the 15th, then the habit first appears in the
+agenda (see [[* Agenda Views]]) on Oct 17, after the minimum of 2 days has
+elapsed, and will appear overdue on Oct 19, after four days have
+elapsed.
 
 What's really useful about habits is that they are displayed along
 with a consistency graph, to show how consistent you've been at
@@ -4303,8 +4302,8 @@ the way habits are displayed in the agenda.
 - ~org-habit-show-habits-only-for-today~ ::
 
      #+vindex: org-habit-show-habits-only-for-today
-     If non-~nil~, only show habits in today's agenda view.  This is
-     set to true by default.
+     If non-~nil~, only show habits in today's agenda view.  The
+     default value is ~t~.
 
 Lastly, pressing {{{kbd(K)}}} in the agenda buffer causes habits to
 temporarily be disabled and do not appear at all.  Press {{{kbd(K)}}}
@@ -4329,11 +4328,12 @@ like this
 #+vindex: org-priority-faces
 #+texinfo: @noindent
 By default, Org mode supports three priorities: =A=, =B=, and =C=.
-=A= is the highest priority.  An entry without a cookie is treated
-just like priority =B=.  Priorities make a difference only for sorting
-in the agenda (see [[*Weekly/daily agenda]]); outside the agenda, they
-have no inherent meaning to Org mode.  The cookies can be highlighted
-with special faces by customizing the variable ~org-priority-faces~.
+=A= is the highest priority.  An entry without a cookie is treated as
+equivalent if it had priority =B=.  Priorities make a difference only
+for sorting in the agenda (see [[*Weekly/daily agenda]]); outside the
+agenda, they have no inherent meaning to Org mode.  The cookies are
+displayed with the face defined by the variable ~org-priority-faces~,
+which can be customized.
 
 Priorities can be attached to any outline node; they do not need to be
 TODO items.
@@ -4345,10 +4345,10 @@ TODO items.
      #+findex: org-priority
      Set the priority of the current headline.  The command prompts
      for a priority character =A=, =B= or =C=.  When you press
-     {{{kbd(SPC)}}} instead, the priority cookie is removed from the
-     headline.  The priorities can also be changed "remotely" from the
-     agenda buffer with the {{{kbd(\,)}}} command (see [[*Commands in
-     the Agenda Buffer]]).
+     {{{kbd(SPC)}}} instead, the priority cookie, if one is set, is
+     removed from the headline.  The priorities can also be changed
+     "remotely" from the agenda buffer with the {{{kbd(\,)}}} command
+     (see [[*Commands in the Agenda Buffer]]).
 
 - {{{kbd(S-UP)}}} (~org-priority-up~); {{{kbd(S-DOWN)}}} (~org-priority-down~) ::
 
@@ -4357,10 +4357,11 @@ TODO items.
      #+findex: org-priority-up
      #+findex: org-priority-down
      #+vindex: org-priority-start-cycle-with-default
-     Increase/decrease priority of current headline[fn:47].  Note that
-     these keys are also used to modify timestamps (see [[*Creating
-     Timestamps]]).  See also [[*Packages that conflict with Org mode]], for
-     a discussion of the interaction with ~shift-selection-mode~.
+     Increase/decrease the priority of the current headline[fn:47].
+     Note that these keys are also used to modify timestamps (see
+     [[*Creating Timestamps]]).  See also [[*Packages that conflict with Org
+     mode]], for a discussion of the interaction with
+     ~shift-selection-mode~.
 
 #+vindex: org-highest-priority
 #+vindex: org-lowest-priority
@@ -4386,10 +4387,10 @@ highest priority is earlier in the alphabet than the lowest priority):
 It is often advisable to break down large tasks into smaller,
 manageable subtasks.  You can do this by creating an outline tree
 below a TODO item, with detailed subtasks on the tree[fn:48].  To keep
-the overview over the fraction of subtasks that are already completed,
-insert either =[/]= or =[%]= anywhere in the headline.  These cookies
-are updated each time the TODO status of a child changes, or when
-pressing {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} on the cookie.  For example:
+an overview of the fraction of subtasks that have already been marked
+DONE, insert either =[/]= or =[%]= anywhere in the headline.  These
+cookies are updated each time the TODO status of a child changes, or
+when pressing {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} on the cookie.  For example:
 
 #+begin_example
 ,* Organize Party [33%]
@@ -5435,7 +5436,7 @@ a more predictable delivery.
 
 When combining a set of such estimates, simply adding the lows and
 highs produces an unrealistically wide result.  Instead, =est+= adds
-the statistical mean and variance of the sub-tasks, generating a final
+the statistical mean and variance of the subtasks, generating a final
 estimate from the sum.  For example, suppose you had ten tasks, each
 of which was estimated at 0.5 to 2 days of work.  Straight addition
 produces an estimate of 5 to 20 days, representing what to expect if
@@ -5817,8 +5818,8 @@ format.
 
      #+kindex: C-c .
      #+findex: org-time-stamp
-     Prompt for a date and insert a corresponding timestamp.  When the
-     cursor is at an existing timestamp in the buffer, the command is
+     Prompt for a date and insert a corresponding timestamp.  When
+     point is at an existing timestamp in the buffer, the command is
      used to modify this timestamp instead of inserting a new one.
      When this command is used twice in succession, a time range is
      inserted.
@@ -5875,19 +5876,18 @@ format.
      #+kindex: S-RIGHT
      #+findex: org-timestamp-down-day
      #+findex: org-timestamp-up-day
-     Change date at cursor by one day.  These key bindings conflict
-     with shift-selection and related modes (see [[*Packages that
-     conflict with Org mode]]).
+     Change date at point by one day.  These key bindings conflict
+     with shift-selection and related modes (see [[*Packages that conflict with Org mode]]).
 
 - {{{kbd(S-UP)}}} (~org-timestamp-up~), {{{kbd(S-DOWN)}}} (~org-timestamp-down~) ::
 
      #+kindex: S-UP
      #+kindex: S-DOWN
      On the beginning or enclosing bracket of a timestamp, change its
-     type.  Within a timestamp, change the item under point.  The
-     cursor can be on a year, month, day, hour or minute.  When the
-     timestamp contains a time range like =15:30-16:30=, modifying the
-     first time also shifts the second, shifting the time block with
+     type.  Within a timestamp, change the item under point.  Point
+     can be on a year, month, day, hour or minute.  When the timestamp
+     contains a time range like =15:30-16:30=, modifying the first
+     time also shifts the second, shifting the time block with
      constant length.  To change the length, modify the second time.
      Note that if point is in a headline and not at a timestamp, these
      same keys modify the priority of an item (see [[*Priorities]]).  The
@@ -6004,18 +6004,18 @@ can control the calendar fully from the minibuffer:
 #+kindex: M-S-LEFT
 #+kindex: RET
 #+attr_texinfo: :columns 0.25 0.55
-| {{{kbd(RET)}}}           | Choose date at cursor in calendar.     |
-| {{{kbd(mouse-1)}}}       | Select date by clicking on it.         |
-| {{{kbd(S-RIGHT)}}}    | One day forward.                       |
-| {{{kbd(S-LEFT)}}}     | One day backward.                      |
-| {{{kbd(S-DOWN)}}}     | One week forward.                      |
-| {{{kbd(S-UP)}}}       | One week backward.                     |
-| {{{kbd(M-S-RIGHT)}}}  | One month forward.                     |
-| {{{kbd(M-S-LEFT)}}}   | One month backward.                    |
-| {{{kbd(>)}}}             | Scroll calendar forward by one month.  |
-| {{{kbd(<)}}}             | Scroll calendar backward by one month. |
-| {{{kbd(M-v)}}}           | Scroll calendar forward by 3 months.   |
-| {{{kbd(C-v)}}}           | Scroll calendar backward by 3 months.  |
+| {{{kbd(RET)}}}       | Choose date at point in calendar.      |
+| {{{kbd(mouse-1)}}}   | Select date by clicking on it.         |
+| {{{kbd(S-RIGHT)}}}   | One day forward.                       |
+| {{{kbd(S-LEFT)}}}    | One day backward.                      |
+| {{{kbd(S-DOWN)}}}    | One week forward.                      |
+| {{{kbd(S-UP)}}}      | One week backward.                     |
+| {{{kbd(M-S-RIGHT)}}} | One month forward.                     |
+| {{{kbd(M-S-LEFT)}}}  | One month backward.                    |
+| {{{kbd(>)}}}         | Scroll calendar forward by one month.  |
+| {{{kbd(<)}}}         | Scroll calendar backward by one month. |
+| {{{kbd(M-v)}}}       | Scroll calendar forward by 3 months.   |
+| {{{kbd(C-v)}}}       | Scroll calendar backward by 3 months.  |
 
 #+vindex: org-read-date-display-live
 The actions of the date/time prompt may seem complex, but I assure you
@@ -6117,8 +6117,8 @@ immediately after the task they refer to.
      #+vindex: org-agenda-skip-scheduled-if-done
      The headline is listed under the given date[fn:65].  In addition,
      a reminder that the scheduled date has passed is present in the
-     compilation for /today/, until the entry is marked DONE, i.e.,
-     the task is automatically forwarded until completed.
+     compilation for /today/, until the entry is marked DONE, (i.e.
+     the task is automatically forwarded until completed).
 
      #+begin_example
      ,*** TODO Call Trillian for a date on New Years Eve.
@@ -6262,8 +6262,8 @@ the repeater should come first and the warning period last: =DEADLINE:
 #+vindex: org-todo-repeat-to-state
 Deadlines and scheduled items produce entries in the agenda when they
 are over-due, so it is important to be able to mark such an entry as
-completed once you have done so.  When you mark a =DEADLINE= or
-a =SCHEDULED= with the TODO keyword =DONE=, it no longer produces
+DONE once you have done so.  When you mark a =DEADLINE= or a
+=SCHEDULED= with the TODO keyword =DONE=, it no longer produces
 entries in the agenda.  The problem with this is, however, is that
 then also the /next/ instance of the repeated entry will not be
 active.  Org mode deals with this in the following way: when you try
@@ -6531,11 +6531,10 @@ formatted as one or several Org tables.
      #+kindex: C-c C-x C-r
      #+findex: org-clock-report
      Insert a dynamic block (see [[*Dynamic Blocks]]) containing a clock
-     report as an Org mode table into the current file.  When the
-     cursor is at an existing clock table, just update it.  When
-     called with a prefix argument, jump to the first clock report in
-     the current document and update it.  The clock table includes
-     archived trees.
+     report as an Org mode table into the current file.  When point is
+     at an existing clock table, just update it.  When called with a
+     prefix argument, jump to the first clock report in the current
+     document and update it.  The clock table includes archived trees.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-c C-c)}}} or {{{kbd(C-c C-x C-u)}}} (~org-dblock-update~) ::
 
@@ -6556,10 +6555,9 @@ formatted as one or several Org tables.
      #+kindex: S-LEFT
      #+kindex: S-RIGHT
      #+findex: org-clocktable-try-shift
-     Shift the current =:block= interval and update the table.  The
-     cursor needs to be in the =#+BEGIN: clocktable= line for this
-     command.  If =:block= is =today=, it is shifted to =today-1=,
-     etc.
+     Shift the current =:block= interval and update the table.  Point
+     needs to be in the =#+BEGIN: clocktable= line for this command.
+     If =:block= is =today=, it is shifted to =today-1=, etc.
 
 Here is an example of the frame for a clock table as it is inserted
 into the buffer with the {{{kbd(C-c C-x C-r)}}} command:
@@ -7112,12 +7110,12 @@ You may also define a global key for capturing new material (see
      #+kindex: C-c C-w @r{(Capture buffer)}
      #+findex: org-capture-refile
      Finalize the capture process by refiling the note to a different
-     place (see [[*Refile and Copy]]).  Please realize that this is
-     a normal refiling command that will be executed---so point
-     position at the moment you run this command is important.  If you
-     have inserted a tree with a parent and children, first move the
-     cursor back to the parent.  Any prefix argument given to this
-     command is passed on to the ~org-refile~ command.
+     place (see [[*Refile and Copy]]).  Please realize that this is a
+     normal refiling command that will be executed---so point position
+     at the moment you run this command is important.  If you have
+     inserted a tree with a parent and children, first move point back
+     to the parent.  Any prefix argument given to this command is
+     passed on to the ~org-refile~ command.
 
 - {{{kbd(C-c C-k)}}} (~org-capture-kill~) ::
 
@@ -7129,7 +7127,7 @@ You may also define a global key for capturing new material (see
 You can also call ~org-capture~ in a special way from the agenda,
 using the {{{kbd(k c)}}} key combination.  With this access, any
 timestamps inserted by the selected capture template defaults to the
-cursor date in the agenda, rather than to the current date.
+date at point in the agenda, rather than to the current date.
 
 To find the locations of the last stored capture, use ~org-capture~
 with prefix commands:
@@ -7527,7 +7525,7 @@ here:
 
 - ~%?~ ::
 
-     After completing the template, position cursor here.
+     After completing the template, position point here.
 
 #+texinfo: @noindent
 #+vindex: org-store-link-props
@@ -8575,12 +8573,12 @@ add the following to one of your agenda files:
 #+end_example
 
 You can then go ahead and define anniversaries for a BBDB record.
-Basically, you need to press {{{kbd(C-o anniversary RET)}}} with the
-cursor in a BBDB record and then add the date in the format
-=YYYY-MM-DD= or =MM-DD=, followed by a space and the class of the
-anniversary (=birthday=, =wedding=, or a format string).  If you omit
-the class, it defaults to =birthday=.  Here are a few examples, the
-header for the file =org-bbdb.el= contains more detailed information.
+Basically, you need to press {{{kbd(C-o anniversary RET)}}} with point
+in a BBDB record and then add the date in the format =YYYY-MM-DD= or
+=MM-DD=, followed by a space and the class of the anniversary
+(=birthday=, =wedding=, or a format string).  If you omit the class,
+it defaults to =birthday=.  Here are a few examples, the header for
+the file =org-bbdb.el= contains more detailed information.
 
 #+begin_example
 1973-06-22
@@ -10042,8 +10040,8 @@ the other commands, point needs to be in the desired line.
 
      #+kindex: c
      #+findex: org-agenda-goto-calendar
-     Open the Emacs calendar and move to the date at the agenda
-     cursor.
+     Open the Emacs calendar and go to the date at point in the
+     agenda.
 
 - {{{kbd(c)}}} (~org-calendar-goto-agenda~) ::
 
@@ -10095,7 +10093,7 @@ the other commands, point needs to be in the desired line.
 
      #+kindex: C
      #+findex: org-agenda-convert-date
-     Convert the date at cursor into many other cultural and historic
+     Convert the date at point into many other cultural and historic
      calendars.
 
 - {{{kbd(H)}}} (~org-agenda-holidays~) ::
@@ -18266,8 +18264,8 @@ init file[fn:138].
 :END:
 #+cindex: speed keys
 
-Single keystrokes can execute custom commands in an Org file when the
-cursor is on a headline.  Without the extra burden of a meta or
+Single keystrokes can execute custom commands in an Org file when
+point is on a headline.  Without the extra burden of a meta or
 modifier key, Speed Keys can speed navigation or execute custom
 commands.  Besides faster navigation, Speed Keys may come in handy on
 small mobile devices that do not have full keyboards.  Speed Keys may
@@ -18286,7 +18284,7 @@ Org comes with a pre-defined list of Speed Keys.  To add or modify
 Speed Keys, customize the variable, ~org-speed-commands-user~.  For
 more details, see the variable's docstring.  With Speed Keys
 activated, {{{kbd(M-x org-speed-command-help)}}}, or {{{kbd(?)}}} when
-cursor is at the beginning of an Org headline, shows currently active
+point is at the beginning of an Org headline, shows currently active
 Speed Keys, including the user-defined ones.
 
 ** Code Evaluation and Security Issues
@@ -18924,11 +18922,12 @@ headings as shown in examples below.
 #+cindex: tty key bindings
 
 Org provides alternative key bindings for TTY and modern mobile
-devices that cannot handle cursor keys and complex modifier key
-chords.  Some of these workarounds may be more cumbersome than
-necessary.  Users should look into customizing these further based on
-their usage needs.  For example, the normal {{{kbd(S-<cursor>)}}} for
-editing timestamp might be better with {{{kbd(C-c .)}}} chord.
+devices that cannot perform movement commands on point and key
+bindings with modifier keys.  Some of these workarounds may be more
+cumbersome than necessary.  Users should look into customizing these
+further based on their usage needs.  For example, the normal
+{{{kbd(S-<cursor>)}}} for editing timestamp might be better with
+{{{kbd(C-c .)}}} chord.
 
 #+attr_texinfo: :columns 0.2 0.28 0.15 0.21
 | Default              | Alternative 1            | Speed key    | Alternative 2        |
@@ -19056,7 +19055,7 @@ packages are documented here.
 
 #+cindex: shift-selection-mode
 #+vindex: org-support-shift-select
-In Emacs, ~shift-selection-mode~ combines cursor motions with shift
+In Emacs, ~shift-selection-mode~ combines motions of point with shift
 key to enlarge regions.  Emacs sets this mode by default.  This
 conflicts with Org's use of {{{kbd(S-<cursor>)}}} commands to change
 timestamps, TODO keywords, priorities, and item bullet types, etc.
@@ -20986,7 +20985,7 @@ change recording note takes precedence and cancel the closing note.
 
 [fn:47] See also the option ~org-priority-start-cycle-with-default~.
 
-[fn:48] To keep subtasks out of the global TODO list, see the
+[fn:48] To keep subtasks out of the global TODO list, see the option
 ~org-agenda-todo-list-sublevels~.
 
 [fn:49] With the exception of description lists.  But you can allow it
-- 
2.18.0


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* Re: Org Mode Documentation Patch
  2018-06-25 14:35       ` Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth
@ 2018-06-25 14:54         ` Nicolas Goaziou
  2018-06-25 16:01           ` Van L
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 7+ messages in thread
From: Nicolas Goaziou @ 2018-06-25 14:54 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth; +Cc: emacs-orgmode

Hello,

"Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth" <siraben@disroot.org> writes:

> I've printed, signed, scanned and sent the assignment to
> assign@gnu.org , waiting for their response.

Nice.

> In the meantime, please install another patch I wrote, attached.

Done, barring one hunk specified below.

> You may notice that the email and name of the patch author is
> different, this is to correspond with my email and legal name. ("Ben"
> is my nickname)

OK.

> -     compilation for /today/, until the entry is marked DONE, i.e.,
> -     the task is automatically forwarded until completed.
> +     compilation for /today/, until the entry is marked DONE, (i.e.
> +     the task is automatically forwarded until completed).

I wasn't convinced by this change so I didn't apply it. The former form
looks correct.

Thank you.

Regards,

-- 
Nicolas Goaziou

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* Re: Org Mode Documentation Patch
  2018-06-25 14:54         ` Nicolas Goaziou
@ 2018-06-25 16:01           ` Van L
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 7+ messages in thread
From: Van L @ 2018-06-25 16:01 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Nicolas Goaziou; +Cc: Org-mode


>> I've printed, signed, scanned and sent the assignment to
>> assign@gnu.org , waiting for their response.
> 
> Nice.

It should be possible to do without printing and 
scanning, do all of the assignment electronically.

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