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- [X] p. 7 In 1779, Kamehameha was a young man on his way up as a
favored nephew of Kalaniopu`u, but isn't it a little early to
refer to his dynasty?
- [X] p. 7 It is true Kamehameha benefited greatly from Western
advice and weapons, but the tradition of conquest was well
established by the time he embarked on his career as a conqueror by
chiefs including Kalaniopu`u, and especially Kahekili.
- [X] p. 7 According to traditions 'Umi's father had been recognized
as paramount of the island. `Umi regained his father's status by
putting down a rebellion of the five districts other than Hamakua
and reunited the polity. I think of this as a civil war rather
than the capture of territory to which he had no previous claim.
In this case the first two items are counted in the headline, but the last one isn't.
If someone could point out what might be going wrong, I'll appreciate it.
All the best,
Tom