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List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: emacs-orgmode-bounces+larch=yhetil.org@gnu.org Sender: "Emacs-orgmode" X-Migadu-Flow: FLOW_IN ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=yhetil.org; s=key1; t=1618355779; h=from:from:sender:sender:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date: message-id:message-id:to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version: content-type:content-type:list-id:list-help:list-unsubscribe: list-subscribe:list-post:dkim-signature; bh=al74F39jfChgiEb9YNknuBrGAOZV94H1u4QIheSDpyk=; b=IfM0PaVugLLmascJXseJAJIhHGQ3oMAnp6AcdnpRrOt+F29UyXRc0uO8dAp3njG4qN/bAV IFUYdeDZDmvbwBPMPzfGtSg3Pg4S4/esHaoEVlo3EXmCGfvwu3Hh4E+SET7Bu++3FDaKKA NunfpJw7p8twotWtf/t/y5O51ySMsUdpLluR7pMZEk4kLfS/nhJVeJlz5t1vOdHPKwqkNC lM1fSuHoJEWijApL2o7ODSjwOa9w8z89G0HN0uWkDnZLeios4lCctddl42VS56nMNVJGyk 29C7DdSNutBHtDkIveSImVGdWZPJDj0tYui9FqymRYflt52B5uW6P5nA51O2SQ== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=key1; d=yhetil.org; t=1618355779; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=pFzayMmDDGsb/Z1Hha5+E4ieAJnZ+QsgiD6i+cUq2drnX0M1dw2i2WmvbIz0gH3sAszPkC dWrT0LBNnzcaS2bHosYEIVBk9AnmkICbmKMPW4MMJ7VTqMvEmAeAc4KO2hXowp4A21AYJD +Ir7J5L4EHspdEgg540Kgao3lsfnxryHprD47O6+WGKiFTDnO6eXmC0DcXBC1yP4FY0v7g KMwlw0//kwPz+V0UDwet0NsKugfVC45FHkESn1xYw4vLtr5B3a2fJe7t1aiy8WorIwTjlv 6DOoaa7nVQsdlPscsQU36YqFu+E2G8X9u2CR+DYlVS3qg7qPm11ELGxYsemA1g== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; aspmx1.migadu.com; dkim=pass header.d=shaw.ca header.s=s20180605 header.b=POGebXv8; dmarc=pass (policy=none) header.from=shaw.ca; spf=pass (aspmx1.migadu.com: domain of emacs-orgmode-bounces@gnu.org designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=emacs-orgmode-bounces@gnu.org X-Migadu-Spam-Score: -1.14 Authentication-Results: aspmx1.migadu.com; dkim=pass header.d=shaw.ca header.s=s20180605 header.b=POGebXv8; dmarc=pass (policy=none) header.from=shaw.ca; spf=pass (aspmx1.migadu.com: domain of emacs-orgmode-bounces@gnu.org designates 209.51.188.17 as permitted sender) smtp.mailfrom=emacs-orgmode-bounces@gnu.org X-Migadu-Queue-Id: 1D51C1BF78 X-Spam-Score: -1.14 X-Migadu-Scanner: scn0.migadu.com X-TUID: mQi/ipBGVxRv --Apple-Mail=_346D2ED4-84D6-43DB-A007-C0D718DE9546 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Hi, I was reading the org manual section on source code blocks and I think there=E2=80=99s a small section where the clarity can be improved. Section 15.1: Features Overview, first paragraph (line 16396 of org.org) original: =E2=80=A6Users can control how live they want each = source code block=E2=80=A6 proposed change 1: =E2=80=A6control how [=E2=80=9Clive=E2=80=9D] = they want=E2=80=A6 proposed change 2: =E2=80=A6control [the =E2=80=9Cliveliness=E2=80= =9D of] each source=E2=80=A6 When the paragraph first introduces the term =E2=80=9Clive code = block=E2=80=9D, it=E2=80=99s italicized. I think it should stay italicized for the rest of that paragraph since it=E2=80=99= s the introduction of the term (I had to re-read the sentence a few times myself before it fully = made sense). Just a small suggestion; it wasn=E2=80=99t detrimental to my = understanding or anything but more of a small hiccup. Best, Ian= --Apple-Mail=_346D2ED4-84D6-43DB-A007-C0D718DE9546 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=utf-8 Hi, = I was reading the org manual section on source code blocks and I
think there=E2=80=99s a small section where the clarity can = be improved.

Section 15.1: Features Overview, first paragraph (line 16396 = of org.org)
original: =E2=80=A6Users can control how live they want each = source code block=E2=80=A6
proposed change 1: =E2=80=A6control how [=E2=80=9Clive=E2=80=9D] they want=E2=80=A6
proposed change 2: = =E2=80=A6control [the =E2=80=9Cliveliness=E2=80=9D of] = each source=E2=80=A6

When the paragraph first introduces the term =E2=80=9Clive code block=E2=80=9D, it=E2=80=99s italicized. I = think
it should stay italicized for the rest of = that paragraph since it=E2=80=99s the introduction of the
term (I had to re-read the sentence a few times myself before = it fully made sense).

Just a small suggestion; it wasn=E2=80=99t detrimental to my = understanding or anything but
more of a small = hiccup.
Best,
Ian
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