Here's my attempt.

It's my first time doing this, so kindly let me know if there's
something I can do better!

For example, should I have replaced the subject line of this email with
the subject in the formatted .patch?


On 2023-06-21 10:26, Ihor Radchenko wrote:
> libreville <libreville@riseup.net> writes:
> 
>> Chapter A.1 Hooks of the Org Manual reads, in its entirety:
>> ...
>> Contrary to what it says, I couldn't find any illustrations of hook
>> usage in the appendix. The Variables index only refers to four, and
>> they're in other places.
>>
>> Perhaps the line about illustrating could be deleted, to avoid sending
>> people on a search for something that isn't there?
> 
> Agree.
> Would you be interested to submit a patch?