From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 From: Carsten Dominik Subject: Re: final proofreading patches Date: Thu, 9 Dec 2010 22:47:27 +0100 Message-ID: References: Mime-Version: 1.0 (Apple Message framework v936) Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed; delsp=yes Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Return-path: Received: from [140.186.70.92] (port=39628 helo=eggs.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.43) id 1PQoOe-0002fZ-SD for emacs-orgmode@gnu.org; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 16:51:37 -0500 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1PQoKs-00089C-E6 for emacs-orgmode@gnu.org; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 16:47:35 -0500 Received: from mail-ew0-f43.google.com ([209.85.215.43]:39655) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1PQoKr-00088u-VF for emacs-orgmode@gnu.org; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 16:47:34 -0500 Received: by ewy22 with SMTP id 22so2093238ewy.30 for ; Thu, 09 Dec 2010 13:47:33 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: List-Id: "General discussions about Org-mode." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Sender: emacs-orgmode-bounces+geo-emacs-orgmode=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Errors-To: emacs-orgmode-bounces+geo-emacs-orgmode=m.gmane.org@gnu.org To: Brian Gough Cc: Barry Gidden , emacs-orgmode@gnu.org Hi Brian and Barry thanks a lot, I have taken all the patches with two exceptions: 1. I had some problems in the past with the @eg macros, so I need to look at that more closely. 2. I am not putting in the footnotes about hot to access Emacs docstrings. Thank you very much, I am sure this is a great improvement in consistency and style of the book. - Carsten On Dec 8, 2010, at 10:21 PM, Brian Gough wrote: > Hi. I just sent our final set of proofreading patches. For reference > the complete list is below, there were 25 in total. > > -- > Brian Gough > > Network Theory Ltd, > Publishing Free Software Manuals --- http://www.network-theory.co.uk/ > > + 03619e889bf061607785f092481dbfe36bcee9be correct doc typos > + 04038c5a1f22ecf8219343e5ea80d1c7298edb90 more serious typos > + 20ba1bd3800f5865cbbf27ae1d550efb892abd90 mismatched quotes > + 67ff0e20cede3ae9afa332a6881184a5153c0881 make Nth consistent > + 2c77e5b2a3b48708b2e0993fe773950332fd6dd2 correct language names, > acronyms etc. > + 246fdc680679a86c77c2736629711cd49e626fa2 correct grammar > + e2a062e23efc44204a7ac124546f1f8b24524d32 use @result{} instead of > --> (looks nicer) > + c877cff82e6b88ddf8e0e3c8bfca08988aad2751 use macro for @LaTeX name > + 993f9dc9423ffea980f74efea1adae152b7e7d05 make use of the provided > @ie and @eg macros to fix the spacing > + 03720efc58d37cbf16c6697d3647de7de144c32e fix commas that should be > full stops, semicolons or emdashes > + 4fe070423e44307dea9e37348187f7fa9985be34 fix plain text that looks > better with markup > + 3e3e3e036de59ab35147ede5f7f234626a4ae96b use kbd font > + 20b1221c8ae3971bd34ea9f7b092944385935fa1 improvements to wording > style > + 07859f743f7c17bd1895feaa0fb4ac14cdeb9ed6 include explanations of > how to look up a docstring > + 62147b263d953cda67813e3ea914f2f6f67f4987 use a full sentence > + bb75bc08045deda9d7216852b8c35d99faacdd97 tangling is not a widely- > known term, describe it as literate programming > + 19ba8a650b91265d31d0c5dfb20f67a872d4d6d0 make "time stamps" > consistent with timestamps > + 9e9260cd609f184d59207254737018dfab49f747 make explanation of > keyword lines clearer > + b3afbe555fdc233c5c1d84948b822421d091cebe use emdashes when needed > + dc1d7e9c5300a043b7ed47728b2347dde7f6a290 put emacs functions in > code font > + c33bc9c261643853a3bf72b711d153cb78226a74 use code font for example > footnote labels > + c813b438bf54233f58c019fe67b13780a1cb69de fix missing word in math > formatting section > + b042807abbdd78a948c1f0d2e845836c208cb061 typo/grammar fix > for .done CSS explanation > + 54b3245810441906c8759bd82d251ef523ba8dbc explain how to check the > default version of Org > + cf1f46960b02b13ae704fdc1f29911c35f350724 add index entries > > _______________________________________________ > Emacs-orgmode mailing list > Please use `Reply All' to send replies to the list. > Emacs-orgmode@gnu.org > http://lists.gnu.org/mailman/listinfo/emacs-orgmode