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* final proofreading patches
@ 2010-12-08 21:21 Brian Gough
  2010-12-09 21:47 ` Carsten Dominik
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 2+ messages in thread
From: Brian Gough @ 2010-12-08 21:21 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: emacs-orgmode; +Cc: Barry Gidden

Hi.  I just sent our final set of proofreading patches.  For reference
the complete list is below, there were 25 in total.

-- 
Brian Gough

Network Theory Ltd,
Publishing Free Software Manuals --- http://www.network-theory.co.uk/

+ 03619e889bf061607785f092481dbfe36bcee9be correct doc typos
+ 04038c5a1f22ecf8219343e5ea80d1c7298edb90 more serious typos
+ 20ba1bd3800f5865cbbf27ae1d550efb892abd90 mismatched quotes
+ 67ff0e20cede3ae9afa332a6881184a5153c0881 make Nth consistent
+ 2c77e5b2a3b48708b2e0993fe773950332fd6dd2 correct language names, acronyms etc.
+ 246fdc680679a86c77c2736629711cd49e626fa2 correct grammar
+ e2a062e23efc44204a7ac124546f1f8b24524d32 use @result{} instead of --> (looks nicer)
+ c877cff82e6b88ddf8e0e3c8bfca08988aad2751 use macro for @LaTeX name
+ 993f9dc9423ffea980f74efea1adae152b7e7d05 make use of the provided @ie and @eg macros to fix the spacing
+ 03720efc58d37cbf16c6697d3647de7de144c32e fix commas that should be full stops, semicolons or emdashes
+ 4fe070423e44307dea9e37348187f7fa9985be34 fix plain text that looks better with markup
+ 3e3e3e036de59ab35147ede5f7f234626a4ae96b use kbd font
+ 20b1221c8ae3971bd34ea9f7b092944385935fa1 improvements to wording style
+ 07859f743f7c17bd1895feaa0fb4ac14cdeb9ed6 include explanations of how to look up a docstring
+ 62147b263d953cda67813e3ea914f2f6f67f4987 use a full sentence
+ bb75bc08045deda9d7216852b8c35d99faacdd97 tangling is not a widely-known term, describe it as literate programming
+ 19ba8a650b91265d31d0c5dfb20f67a872d4d6d0 make "time stamps" consistent with timestamps
+ 9e9260cd609f184d59207254737018dfab49f747 make explanation of keyword lines clearer
+ b3afbe555fdc233c5c1d84948b822421d091cebe use emdashes when needed
+ dc1d7e9c5300a043b7ed47728b2347dde7f6a290 put emacs functions in code font
+ c33bc9c261643853a3bf72b711d153cb78226a74 use code font for example footnote labels
+ c813b438bf54233f58c019fe67b13780a1cb69de fix missing word in math formatting section
+ b042807abbdd78a948c1f0d2e845836c208cb061 typo/grammar fix for .done CSS explanation
+ 54b3245810441906c8759bd82d251ef523ba8dbc explain how to check the default version of Org
+ cf1f46960b02b13ae704fdc1f29911c35f350724 add index entries

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* Re: final proofreading patches
  2010-12-08 21:21 final proofreading patches Brian Gough
@ 2010-12-09 21:47 ` Carsten Dominik
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 2+ messages in thread
From: Carsten Dominik @ 2010-12-09 21:47 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Brian Gough; +Cc: Barry Gidden, emacs-orgmode

Hi Brian and Barry

thanks a lot, I have taken all the patches with two exceptions:

1. I had some problems in the past with the @eg macros, so
    I need to look at that more closely.
2. I am not putting in the footnotes about hot to access Emacs  
docstrings.

Thank you very much, I am sure this is a great improvement
in consistency and style of the book.

- Carsten

On Dec 8, 2010, at 10:21 PM, Brian Gough wrote:

> Hi.  I just sent our final set of proofreading patches.  For reference
> the complete list is below, there were 25 in total.
>
> -- 
> Brian Gough
>
> Network Theory Ltd,
> Publishing Free Software Manuals --- http://www.network-theory.co.uk/
>
> + 03619e889bf061607785f092481dbfe36bcee9be correct doc typos
> + 04038c5a1f22ecf8219343e5ea80d1c7298edb90 more serious typos
> + 20ba1bd3800f5865cbbf27ae1d550efb892abd90 mismatched quotes
> + 67ff0e20cede3ae9afa332a6881184a5153c0881 make Nth consistent
> + 2c77e5b2a3b48708b2e0993fe773950332fd6dd2 correct language names,  
> acronyms etc.
> + 246fdc680679a86c77c2736629711cd49e626fa2 correct grammar
> + e2a062e23efc44204a7ac124546f1f8b24524d32 use @result{} instead of  
> --> (looks nicer)
> + c877cff82e6b88ddf8e0e3c8bfca08988aad2751 use macro for @LaTeX name
> + 993f9dc9423ffea980f74efea1adae152b7e7d05 make use of the provided  
> @ie and @eg macros to fix the spacing
> + 03720efc58d37cbf16c6697d3647de7de144c32e fix commas that should be  
> full stops, semicolons or emdashes
> + 4fe070423e44307dea9e37348187f7fa9985be34 fix plain text that looks  
> better with markup
> + 3e3e3e036de59ab35147ede5f7f234626a4ae96b use kbd font
> + 20b1221c8ae3971bd34ea9f7b092944385935fa1 improvements to wording  
> style
> + 07859f743f7c17bd1895feaa0fb4ac14cdeb9ed6 include explanations of  
> how to look up a docstring
> + 62147b263d953cda67813e3ea914f2f6f67f4987 use a full sentence
> + bb75bc08045deda9d7216852b8c35d99faacdd97 tangling is not a widely- 
> known term, describe it as literate programming
> + 19ba8a650b91265d31d0c5dfb20f67a872d4d6d0 make "time stamps"  
> consistent with timestamps
> + 9e9260cd609f184d59207254737018dfab49f747 make explanation of  
> keyword lines clearer
> + b3afbe555fdc233c5c1d84948b822421d091cebe use emdashes when needed
> + dc1d7e9c5300a043b7ed47728b2347dde7f6a290 put emacs functions in  
> code font
> + c33bc9c261643853a3bf72b711d153cb78226a74 use code font for example  
> footnote labels
> + c813b438bf54233f58c019fe67b13780a1cb69de fix missing word in math  
> formatting section
> + b042807abbdd78a948c1f0d2e845836c208cb061 typo/grammar fix  
> for .done CSS explanation
> + 54b3245810441906c8759bd82d251ef523ba8dbc explain how to check the  
> default version of Org
> + cf1f46960b02b13ae704fdc1f29911c35f350724 add index entries
>
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